Day 22 of A Month with Yeats and the quote from Jane Dougherty is:
‘I wander by the edge of this desolate lake where wind cries in the sedge:’ —W.B. Yeats
My poem is: BUOYANT
Is it here where the tears
come to find peace
in this place of serenity?
I lay down this lake of loss,
hope for the soil
to soak up the sorrow,
by the side sedge
I wedge myself up from the waste
and bury all that turned base
at the bottom of this bed,
no longer sheets of cotton comfort
but sludge soon to be swept under,
asunder.
Is it here where reality
ripples into reflection,
the sinking illusion
of what I thought to be perfection?
An impression of light and shade,
now lighter, now shadier,
now just a remainder
waiting for time to submerge.
I lay down in this lake;
a lough of loss, locked, lost,
waiting for the tide
to wash over me,
waiting for the tears
to dissolve within me,
waiting for time
to refine me, re-find me
buoyant instead of beaten.
All words and photographs by Damien B. Donnelly
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I’m glad you can rise. It sounds like (from your comments on Jane’s page) that you’ve had an awful day.
An awful week so far but it’s nearly Monday again!!!
So sorry–too bad you’re not in my neighbor, you could come for Thanksgiving. 🙂
Oh my god! I forgot! Happy thanksgiving my dearest! The smell of delicious food must be amazing at your place! Have a wonderful day 🤗
I’m just finishing up breakfast now. 🙂 I hope you have a wonderful day today, dear Damien. 🙂
This is more of a sea than a lake! Is a lough tidal? This feels like waves building and rising, with the repetition and wordplay.