It’s day 19 of Jane Dougherty’s brilliantly creative and challenging A Month with Yeats poetry challenge and today’s quote is a second one from ‘The Valley of the Black Pig’: ‘We who still labour by the cromlech on the shore, the grey cairn on the hill, when day sinks drowned in dew, being weary of the world’s empires, bow down to you, master of the still stars and of the flaming door.’—W.B. Yeats
Jane’s blog is: https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/2017/11/19/a-month-with-yeats-day-nineteen/
My poem today is called SPELLING PEACE
And in between turns the tide,
in between the heavens on fire
and the heathens
freezing below, for hire,
I watch from this ticking tomb,
this dolman of deserved doubt,
forced to find footing here
on front of all this currish clout
as the sand’s siphoned
from the slithering shore,
greedy for the grains
human hands cannot hope to hold,
the sea ceaselessly
sucking more and more
from the less and less
that lunges listlessly
with the rest who hope and hoar,
souls for sale
as selfishly subservient civilians
seal another nail
in another box of beaten bones,
bruised with too many battles,
stones have warped on the waves
as time twists tongues into telling tattles;
we are no longer ripples;
buoyant in our beauty,
but grown greedy
as we dig the graves
we’ll one day drown in,
never quite trusting the fights
that came before,
the truths once worth the marching
of boots through the mud.
These are the days of the duds,
envy is the new enemy,
celebrity the sought-after salvation
as the hopeful fall to but a handful
on front of such talentless damnation.
Do the demons derive distraction
as we disappear
beneath our own destruction?
We no longer discern
the halo from the horn,
nor have time to stop and mourn,
the devil dances in the daylight
on main street’s prime time,
Disney has dipped below the darkness
and god is now a forgotten phony
once founded in faith,
now fated to be nothing
more than wraith.
And still we stand beneath the dolman,
dull men, trying to spell peace
with the wrong alphabets letters,
wondering if time’s tides will ever cease
and how many wrongs must we right
before we can come face to face
with our betters.
All words and photographs by Damien B. Donnelly
Powerful! So many good lines in this, but I think my favourite is
as selfishly subservient civilians
seal another nail
in another box of beaten bones,
bruised with too many battles,
stones have warped on the waves
as time twists tongues into telling tattles;
Thanks Jane, I was babysitting today so maybe it added a little tension between the lines!! 😂
Nothing like babies for setting the teeth on edge 🙂
I love the way you place with alliterative sounds, as in the lines Jane quotes above. We all seem to be talking about peace. Too bad those in power don’t listen to us.
Exactly, and we do have really good things to say sometimes!!!
🙂
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