Even in paradise,
on paved paths long pillaged,
the palms are no longer placid
and shady skies swell with storms
as rivers rumble with ripples
from ructions bellowing between
the blues at the bottom
and the clouds congregating,
without comfort, by the high heavens
and, blowing on boisterous breezes
nearby, are names I once knew,
faces forming of fidelities forgotten
in the foaming waters
where once there was weight
now withered with ruin
like colours that run
in the wash, in the tempest
that turns through time,
too lost to latch on to,
too fragile to fight
the currents currently pervading
this paradise now paved and perishing
like parts of me long lost
in a sea now swelling beneath me…
All Words and Photographs by Damien B. Donnelly
Photograph taken in Turks and Caicos.
Audio version available on SoundCloud:
https://soundcloud.com/damien-donnelly-2/blues-at-the-bottom
I love all that sustained alliteration 🙂
Thanks Jane, I get very excited about it too as you can tell xx
As long as it’s done well (and you do use it well), alliteration is a tremendous poetic device.
Amazing poetry – that makes one imagine all the scenery mentioned within the poem!
Thank you so much. I am really pleased you enjoyed reading this. Thanks for taking the time to drop by. Best wishes, Damien