Day 5 of Jane Dougherty’s poetry challenge A Month with Yeats. Today’s quote is from The Wanderings of Oisin: Book One: “and like a sunset were her lips, a stormy sunset on doomed ships; a citron colour gloomed in her hair,” W. B. Yeats.
Below is the link to Jane’s blog: https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/2017/11/05/a-month-with-yeats-day-five/
My poem is called: SUNKEN SHIPS AT SUNSET
And down fell the sun
and drowned within the sea
and rough raged the wreckage
as the sailors tried to flee.
And down fell the sun
as a storm claimed the skies
and water stole the rafters
and silence crushed the cries.
And down fell the sun
as the sirens swam to shore
and laid down the bodies
of the lives that were no more.
And down fell the sun
and a sorrow filled the air
as the sirens sang their song
combing cords through golden hair.
And down fell the sun
as their tears flowed like waves
and they kissed the fallen sailors
on the sand, now their graves.
And down fell the sun
as the sirens said goodbye
to the men mortal men who loved them;
the sea’s sad sirens who cannot die.
All words and photographs by Damien B. Donnelly
Now that is a perfect sea shanty! You should set it to music. The sirens get a bad press, but I like the way you treat them. Just doing their sad job.
Thanks Jane- thought it was time to give it up for the sirens!!
I’m cheering 🙂
Ah, the siren had it for the mortal men.
I love the rhythm and repetition in this–beautifully done, Damien!
I just got to Day 5 (and 6)–and I ended up writing up sirens, too. I hadn’t read yours. 🙂
Sirens are in the air it seems and not just in the sea-I just read your poetic beauty now! Perfect twist of both quotes!
Thank you. Now I’m imagining flying sirens. . .