We slither and snake
in united unison
past the signals
and the stations
and the beggar
with his chanson,
trying to get
his chance on,
clambering to get
his way on,
chancing his way
on into pockets
of passengers
loosing patience.
We slither and snake
our manoeuvres
along the carriages
of commuters
preoccupied by i-tunes
on iPhones and
hand held computers
and fold away scouters
while a girl eyes a guy
in a muscle bound shirt
as another guy notices
the mini of her skirt
and dreams of dessert,
dreams of slithering,
sensual and slow,
along her carriage,
to drive his train
into her station
like he were Spartacus,
the Thracian,
now riding high
on the train’s vibration.
We slither and snake
through the darkness
on tracks laid and loyal
unlike our own tracks
seasoned to spoil,
we light upon
platforms packed
with people panicking
fretting about fitting,
fitting on, fitting in,
into trains and tracks
and skirts and holes,
cyber lives
make us whole.
We slither and snake
and stand closer,
strangers coming closer
to scents and smells
and stenches
that choke us,
breaths breathing
on the backs
of tensed up necks
of strangers
struggling,
slithering and snaking
on tracks that take us
back and forth
to and fro,
to work, to home,
to him, to her,
to passing parties
and improbable
possibilities.
We slither and snake
as strangers we make
but we follow
the same track,
blind to the future
and who stands
behind our back.
We slither and snake
and sheep,
baa baa
baa baa…
All Words by Damien B. Donnelly
So captivating, beautifully written and spot on! Thank you for the lovely read!
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